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When I see you, my mind goes crazy.

Your eyes are like stars. They help me find my way through darkness.

Your voice is like a choir of angels singing. It's divine.

Your lips are soft as velvet. I can not ever get enough of them.

Your hair is like the sunshine. It lights me up every time I see it.

You did the impossible: steal my heart.

With other words:
     

              Would you
                               be my
                                        Valentine?

                   
Right, so our english teacher gave us this "project" : make up a Valentines Day poem...so here's mine :)
Hopefully you'll all like it and maybe she'll give me a good mark :D
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mirimitosa Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's nice, but don't really rime at most parts *I'm being a harsh critic :P* study poems a bit more and then try to redo it)
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Kerle3 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wasn't trying to make it rime though :)
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dark-angel70107 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
AWESOME
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Kerle3 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^ :heart:
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dark-angel70107 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
no problem
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Angelii-D Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
This is a wonderful expression i liked Clap Clap  Amuse me :D (Big Grin) 
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Kerle3 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you cx
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Angelii-D Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Professional General Artist
u r very welcome leeteuk (Super Junior) 
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CRGPhotography Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great piece bud :D
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Kerle3 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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